Showing posts with label first novels. Show all posts
Showing posts with label first novels. Show all posts

Saturday, January 13, 2024

2024 #2: Remarkably Bright Creatures (Van Pelt)

 

Remarkably Bright CreaturesRemarkably Bright Creatures by Shelby Van Pelt
My rating: 4 of 5 stars

I've long been a fan of octopi, long before the film My Octopus Teacher made many people sit up and take notice of these wonderfully intelligent and mysterious creatures. Around 2018 or so, they went on my personal "do not eat" list, which aligns with my own needs/choices. I say all this because it was around 2017 or so when I started noticing videos and stories about octopi escaping their enclosures at aquariums. And this kind of behavior makes them easy to anthropomorphize!

So we meet Marcellus, the sometimes-narrator of Remarkably Bright Creatures. He is the linchpin of the story, and every bit the octopus we hope he would be. Shelby Van Pelt manages to give him narrative agency without resorting to maudlin sentimentality (see also Six-Thirty in Lessons in Chemistry). I applaud this. Many of the characters are vivid and well-written: Tova Sullivan, Ethan Mack, and Jeanne Cassmore stand out.

I struggled to enjoy Cameron Cassmore as a character, and I think that's part of what made this book 4 stars instead of 5, for me. He is so self-deprecating and self-pitying at times that it was difficult to gather sympathy for him. His clear love and respect for his Aunt Jeanne notwithstanding, every time his character started to grow up a step, I felt something else happened to move him two steps back. While growth is never linear, of course, this pattern disrupted the narrative flow for me, particularly given my other quibble described below.

The book isn't a mystery per se, but there are a couple of mysteries contained therein, and the big one was revealed far too early to us (the reader), so I spent a good chunk of the book getting frustrated waiting for the characters to catch up. But that frustration illuminates the soul and wisdom of Marcellus, whose patience and life-view is laudatory, so in that regard, it may have ultimately been a good thing!

Other subplots are very moving, particularly Tova's situation, as we learn how she navigated/continues to navigate life without her son and her husband, and her estrangement with her brother. Her narrative had a lot of moments that made me cry unexpectedly:

"These women have always worn motherhood big and loud on their chests, but Tova keeps hers inside, sunk deep in her guts like an old bullet. Private."

Ultimately there's a lot of wisdom here, tucked into the nooks and crannies, the way Marcellus keeps his treasures in his enclosures: "Humans are the only species who subvert truth for their own entertainment." I don't know if that is COMPLETELY true, as I have not studied imagination and animal behavior to any great extent, but we know what that little nugget means. The wisdom is delivered through a wide variety of characters and decisions, even mistakes. It is definitely an enjoyable read, and I'll look forward to more from Shelby Van Pelt.


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Sunday, May 10, 2020

2020 #2: Revelation (Makah Island Mysteries, Bk. 1) - Drayer

Revelation: Makah Island Mysteries Book OneRevelation: Makah Island Mysteries Book One by Amy Drayer
My rating: 4 of 5 stars

This was enjoyable from start to finish. I love Jo as the flawed protagonist because she's real. Within this mystery, Drayer weaves in a potent commentary about the importance of place, community, and the choices we make. The characters are vivid and multi-dimensional, full of individual mysteries both large and small. The Pacific Northwest is more than a backdrop here --the landscape comes alive with every plot point and narrative detail. This is no clichéd good vs. bad mystery novel, but instead a complex tapestry of characters and environments.

Sunday, March 13, 2011

50BC11 #3: Putting Away Childish Things

Putting Away Childish Things: A Tale of Modern FaithPutting Away Childish Things: A Tale of Modern Faith by Marcus J. Borg

My rating: 4 of 5 stars


I'll be honest and say that I'd like to give this book two different ratings. As a novel, I'd give it only three, maybe 3.5, stars. As a "didatic novel" (what Borg calls it), it rates higher (hence the four stars). So, in the end, I think I really wanted to read a novel, not the latter.

On a personal level, I had a lot in common with the protagonist, Kate--a young introspective professor, who drives a red Volvo! Borg does a good job of developing her character as well as presenting a vivid supporting cast in Fredrika, Geoff, and to some extent, Martin (although I wanted more there).

Depending on the reader's background in theology and desire for it, this novel will at times seem tedious as the various characters exchange in Christian theological discussions which are largely meant to educate the reader. I felt the classroom discussions were rather contrived, although I congratulate Marcus Borg if those discussions were based on his actual teaching experience. Kate's class is one that most professors will only dream of having.

There was, however, quite a bit that touched me in this novel, largely through the protagonist. Universal themes of rejection, self-doubt, growth, leaps of faith--it is all there, and much of it was very resonant as I am familiar with the political environment of academia.

I admire Borg's non-fiction writing to a tremendous degree and hope that a second novel will aim to be less didactic, perhaps, because the strength of this novel was actually obfuscated by the "teaching" aspect.